Blog #13
When I look back at my original paper and then how I fixed it to flow together nicely, alot of things came to mind. First of all, it’s a totally different thing to write each part of a paper separately rather than all as one thing. When I took all the parts of my paper and put them together, it didn’t make sense at all. I had to go back and rewrite a good bit of my beginning parts of my paragraphs and the endings too. With all that rewritten, my paper was starting to come together and look like a nicely flowing research paper. At this point, the most editing is probably gonna be attributed to my literature review section. Just putting more information in there and making it flow nicely is gonna be tough. From here, I need to go get my survey out and about, look over the results and write about that. I find it difficult to try and formulate questions that I think will extract the information I’m looking for. But than again, I’m not trying to prove a point either way, I’m just trying to see what people’s thoughts are on a certain subject and see if they corrolate to others’ thoughts.
